Xiao Ming and I are good friend.We ofen read books and play games together.Xiao Ming is 12 years old,and I am 12 years old.But she heavier than me.She's 35 kilograms.I'am 32 kilograms.Xiao Ming is 1.41 meters.I'm 3 cm taller than Xiao Ming.I'm1.44 meters.We are classmates.We all like drawing.

We aregood friends!

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Xiao Ming and I are good friends. We ofen read books and play games together. Xiao Ming is 12 years old, and I am 12 years old, too. She is heavier than me. She's 35 kilograms, and I'm 32 kilograms. Xiao Ming is 1.41 meters. I'm 3 cm taller than Xiao Ming. We are classmates.We all like drawing.

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